Thursday, August 16, 2012

Aroma


Often, when I repose on
a firm branch of love
and my senses awake,
I feel an aroma
somewhere very close to me
that fills up air
in and out
my heart palpitates hard
and I wonder
from where does it come!
It could be so
spring has just approached
in the sky
some wondrous flowers
while floating
have bloomed
together.
or the spring is 
on an embracing spree..
and I am besotted
 a musk deer.

18 comments:

  1. Excellent poem.. Congrats for a nice set up.

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    1. Thank you sir. Glad that you liked the poem.

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  2. great direction with this poem...very well-written....and even a bit romantic

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    1. Thank you Joanne. Thanks for your visit and appreciation/

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  3. I really like how you have put together a poem that goes with how they say Spring is in the air and Love will soon bloom. I too agree with Joanne in that you have made it romantic in your poem. Really cool!

    Thanks so much for joining us in our Theme Thursdays and I hope you really enjoy being a part of the TT family. Lots of fun having you here.

    God bless.

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    1. Thank you Mrsupole for your warmth and support. :)

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  4. Lovely poem full of rhythm and romanticism, modern style mixed with classical scent, perfumed with delicate sensuality.
    I wonder if you meant my heart palpitates HEARD or my heart palpitates HARD or my heart palpitations heard.
    Very, very beautiful indeed.
    Thanks for sharing.
    :)

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    1. Thank you so much Dulcina for your lovely comment on my poem. And more I am obliged to you for finding out the mistake that I missed. Yes it is 'hard' instead of 'heard'. I have corrected the same. Thank you so much...:)

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    1. Thank you daydreamer for your visit and kind word of appreciation.

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  6. I LOVE "and I am besotted a musk deer". Just wonderful.

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  7. "Embracing spree"...what a fantastic phrase.

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